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Grazhir (grazhir) wrote,
@ 2007-09-20 04:56:00

Current music:	Suikoden III \| Ceremonial Ruins
Entry tags:	alerts, breakpoint

Breakpoint
Chapter 15, Veritas, is now available.

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	animehime 2007-09-20 09:21 am UTC (link)
	I squeed when I saw the update. XD Hm. This was an interesting chapter. I liked the little bits of levity you injected with Saiph inviting Voldemort to dinner. :) And the information given in the way of the prophesies is nicely setting the stage for later events. :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

	grazhir 2007-09-20 07:40 pm UTC (link)
	I still wonder at times if I'll ever manage to get that Star Wars t-shirt a cameo again. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	animehime 2007-09-20 11:36 pm UTC (link)
	That would be so cool. :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

jillypooh
2007-09-20 11:18 pm UTC (link)

It's taken me most of the day to get back here to leave a review. I went back and read the whole story again to get it more firmly fixed in my mind. And I kept going off on tangents. A good bit of time was lost at ThinkGeek and then I went looking for recipes at one point.

But anyhoo I enjoyed this chapter immensely. Like Draco I giggled at the thought of a feared Dark Lord having teriyaki chicken with the peeps.

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	grazhir 2007-09-20 11:24 pm UTC (link)
	It's easy to get lost at ThinkGeek! It kinda feels like it's been forever since I managed a chapter for this, but unless I'm at a steady pace (which I've not been for ages) I go back and read the entire story again and jot down any new ideas that comes to mind before working on a new chapter. Either way, I really wanted to push that hard plot point, the prophecy. (Reply to this) (Parent)