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Update
Nimby would like to inform everyone that during the Great Editing Spree of Early January 2009, Forsaken has been flogged mercilessly with wet noodles until it begged. Copies at Grazhir and the Pit of Despair have been updated. Also, the PDF copy available at Grazhir has been redone to reflect these changes.

Mostly it was just minor editing for consistency, stomping on redundancy, de-awkwardizing some dialogue, and stuff like that.